From 0bbb97dd1539a01810242777487292b3cde6bb95 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ryan Seys <ryanseys@google.com>
Date: Mon, 4 Apr 2016 14:24:18 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix a couple typos and clarify UI requirements for banner
 images

Change-Id: Ibfe89c9f30ea274c613e17fbb03878d17fff3351
---
 docs/html/design/tv/patterns.jd      | 11 ++++++-----
 docs/html/training/tv/start/start.jd | 14 ++++++--------
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/html/design/tv/patterns.jd b/docs/html/design/tv/patterns.jd
index 622e67862f887..53bdd0513f70e 100644
--- a/docs/html/design/tv/patterns.jd
+++ b/docs/html/design/tv/patterns.jd
@@ -23,14 +23,15 @@ page.title=UI Patterns for TV
 
 <h2 id="banner">App and Game Banners</h3>
 
-<p>App Banners represent your app or game on the home screens of TV devices and serve and as a way for
-  users to launch your app. Here are the specific requirements for a banner image:
-</p>
+<p>Banners are images that represent the face of your app or game on the home
+  screens of Android TV devices and serve as a way for users to launch your app.
+  Here are the requirements for your banner image:</p>
 
 <ul>
   <li>Size: 320 x 180 px, xhdpi resource</li>
-  <li>Text should be included in the image. If your app is available in more than one
-      language, you must provide versions of the banner image for each supported language.</li>
+  <li>Text must be included in the image. If your app is available in more than
+  one language, you must provide versions of the banner image for each supported
+  language.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>See <a href="{@docRoot}training/tv/start/start.html#banner">Provide a home screen banner</a>
diff --git a/docs/html/training/tv/start/start.jd b/docs/html/training/tv/start/start.jd
index 0ed6e15950a61..492cec8280689 100755
--- a/docs/html/training/tv/start/start.jd
+++ b/docs/html/training/tv/start/start.jd
@@ -201,9 +201,12 @@ supported by Android TV.</p>
 <h3 id="banner">Provide a home screen banner</h3>
 
 <p>
-  An application must provide a home screen banner for each localization if it includes a Leanback
-  launcher intent filter. The banner is the app launch point that appears on the home screen in the
-  apps and games rows. Desribe the banner in the manifest as follows:
+  An application must provide a home screen banner image for each localization
+  if it includes a Leanback launcher intent filter. The banner is the app launch
+  point that appears on the home screen in the apps and games rows. When designing your banner,
+  follow the design requirements described in
+  <a href="{@docRoot}design/tv/patterns.html#banner">Banners</a>.
+  To add the banner to your app, describe the banner in the manifest as follows:
 </p>
 
 <pre>
@@ -223,11 +226,6 @@ supported by Android TV.</p>
   tag to supply a banner for a specific activity.
 </p>
 
-<p>
-  See <a href="{@docRoot}design/tv/patterns.html#banner">Banners</a> in the UI Patterns for TV
-  design guide.
-</p>
-
 <h3 id="transition-color">Change the launcher color</h3>
 
 <p>When a TV app launches, the system displays an animation that resembles an expanding, filled